Minor Progress to Report

Inspirational cover for "An Empire Forgotten"

Inspirational cover for "An Empire Forgotten"

Finally, after what seems forever I have some small bit of progress to report. Sat down and edited chapter 2 of An Empire Forgotten.

One of the goals in this edit is to reduce some of the tedium present in those early chapters as I initially learned my characters and got them into place to meet and start adventuring. I’m doing this by merging some scenes and removing the bloated ones. Hopefully by the time I am done the first 8 chapters will be down to 4 or 5.

The edited chapter concerns Hieronymus’ entry into Choy. Dropped some wayward ideas I had at the time, tightened up the descriptions, cleaned up the grammar, and hopefully made it a more interesting and a faster paced read.

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Now suffering in the hinterlands of Michigan while trying to transform myself into a fiction author. Don't wait up.
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